09-02-2014, 03:56 AM
Hey b,
I really like the sound you achieved here. I would do with less cymbals (esp. in the beginning) and broaden the vocals out a bit though. I do love the sound you were able to get from the drums. At the end was the only place I found myself swimming a bit. There were some of the vocals that were right on the fringe that never got above the water, and I didn't feel a solid cohesiveness between the vocals that were floating out front. Aside from that - great sound and a good balance. Nice Job!
I really like the sound you achieved here. I would do with less cymbals (esp. in the beginning) and broaden the vocals out a bit though. I do love the sound you were able to get from the drums. At the end was the only place I found myself swimming a bit. There were some of the vocals that were right on the fringe that never got above the water, and I didn't feel a solid cohesiveness between the vocals that were floating out front. Aside from that - great sound and a good balance. Nice Job!