Jakobsen'What have u done to me'

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Listenin on speakers I hear you have a bit loend build up, especially the bass could benefit from a little thinnin in the 200 hz department.
Also the 1-3 k are a bit messy in vocals and guitars, maybe from boostin that area in all 3 ? Another approach would be choosin say dippin 1,5 in voices and boostin broad but little with another band of eq, and same treatment on gtrs, that way they dont clash but still get more hiend. Experimentation is the key here. If you cant hear the drums boostin them isnt necessarily the answer but cuttin holes with eq in other instrument group to make space could be the answer.
There are so many ways
For the piano, did you boost it around 2k ? it sounds a bit like it sings hrough the nose if you get the idea, if so try lowering the boost or boost elsewhere, maybe higher or try cuttin instead.

But very very good job for a first mix, Im impressed

Thanks for tips, that why i chose to write u personally, cuz i know u've got the ears for music and I'm really gonna apply those tips, appreciate that.Cheers.