A surprisingly tricky - 1 of the First

[Mixinthecloud]

Hey mixingthecloud,
The whole thing sounds very harmonious. Everything is well balanced. 
However it lacks a little life, it has no bite. Maybe “lightening up” everything would have more impact? 
In any case, very good work..
Franz.

When I listened to the song my first impression of it did not include it needing more 'bite'. IMHO, this was not a song or arrangement that called for bite, but more of a softer dreamscape. First impressions are important and I followed mine here. I listened to your mix and it is certainly livelier than mine and sounds good.