15-04-2024, 10:38 PM
Nice mix.
Drums and bass seem a bit hot for this tune and kick and bass are competing for space and the kick is losing.
Snare is too hot and a bit boxy a bit of sizzle on top and a touch more plate maybe.
The loop was a tough one to get to any degree of satisfaction so not a slam the snare took a bit of taming.
No 2nd drum loop which left the build a bit lacking in dynamics.
Guitars sound nice but disappear in the chorus and the vibe just withers.
Vocals sound nice but all up the middle it seems panning would provide a bit more dimension.
If you're not automating things that is a practice you need to apply.
Anyway just an old mans perspective.
Cheers Moto
Drums and bass seem a bit hot for this tune and kick and bass are competing for space and the kick is losing.
Snare is too hot and a bit boxy a bit of sizzle on top and a touch more plate maybe.
The loop was a tough one to get to any degree of satisfaction so not a slam the snare took a bit of taming.
No 2nd drum loop which left the build a bit lacking in dynamics.
Guitars sound nice but disappear in the chorus and the vibe just withers.
Vocals sound nice but all up the middle it seems panning would provide a bit more dimension.
If you're not automating things that is a practice you need to apply.
Anyway just an old mans perspective.
Cheers Moto