02-04-2024, 02:54 PM
(This post was last modified: 02-04-2024, 02:56 PM by Rustyruss.
Edit Reason: adding thoughts
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Hi Alex , nice overall tone and warmth, I like the placement of your elements, Also nice tone of your elements. On first pass it sounds fairly solid and open .
On second listen a few critiques; as main elements enter; the bass is a little to forward, thus masking the vocal; for my personal taste the vocal is a little heavy in the low mids and needs a little shelving which will then make it match the sonics of the rest of your elements. but a nice tone overall.
The solo acoustic a little louder and cleaner or possible it own verb space?
As this is a sparse arrangement as such, I would say you have more room to be creative with some ear candy; verbs ,delay, etc a bit of automation.
I feel the drums need some sustain for example a verb with a med delay time; just to fill in those spaces, and for them to blend together within the track.
I like where you have taken this. All my comments above are said with the idea of small gentle adjustments nothing to heavy handed.
well done.
Keep on keeping on.
On second listen a few critiques; as main elements enter; the bass is a little to forward, thus masking the vocal; for my personal taste the vocal is a little heavy in the low mids and needs a little shelving which will then make it match the sonics of the rest of your elements. but a nice tone overall.
The solo acoustic a little louder and cleaner or possible it own verb space?
As this is a sparse arrangement as such, I would say you have more room to be creative with some ear candy; verbs ,delay, etc a bit of automation.
I feel the drums need some sustain for example a verb with a med delay time; just to fill in those spaces, and for them to blend together within the track.
I like where you have taken this. All my comments above are said with the idea of small gentle adjustments nothing to heavy handed.
well done.
Keep on keeping on.