16-03-2024, 08:03 PM
Hi Phil. A few thoughts on first listen. Is your kick a triggered sample; It seems sub heavy and really bombastic?
there are lots of good tonal elements , but I feel these get lost among other issues.
I think a good starting place that will enable those good elements to shine, would be to sort the foundation of the mix; the drums and bass. I try to pick three elements of the mix that I want to shine, then work the rest around that .
Eg. always the vocal, then the three. My final thought was your vocal sounds like it sits in a complete different room to the rest of the mix which made the mix sound like 2 separate mixes.
Hope this is helpful.
Keep on keeping on
there are lots of good tonal elements , but I feel these get lost among other issues.
I think a good starting place that will enable those good elements to shine, would be to sort the foundation of the mix; the drums and bass. I try to pick three elements of the mix that I want to shine, then work the rest around that .
Eg. always the vocal, then the three. My final thought was your vocal sounds like it sits in a complete different room to the rest of the mix which made the mix sound like 2 separate mixes.
Hope this is helpful.
Keep on keeping on