28-02-2024, 01:08 PM
Greetings, (and welcome),
My thinking: this is a song with important, somber lyrics (text). Therefore voice should be in the foreground, and should sound relatively intimate (and not be made "big" or "powerful" with reverb for example).
So I like that you put the drums in the background. But I do not like that less important instruments (e.g. keys on the right) are more to the front than the vocals (which are pushed back).
I would put the vocals in the front, supporting instruments a bit to the back, and drum can stay at the back, or bring it forward al long as it does not bother the clarity of the others parts.
My thinking: this is a song with important, somber lyrics (text). Therefore voice should be in the foreground, and should sound relatively intimate (and not be made "big" or "powerful" with reverb for example).
So I like that you put the drums in the background. But I do not like that less important instruments (e.g. keys on the right) are more to the front than the vocals (which are pushed back).
I would put the vocals in the front, supporting instruments a bit to the back, and drum can stay at the back, or bring it forward al long as it does not bother the clarity of the others parts.