The idea in the C-Part is intriguing, although the timing isn't quite precise, resulting in the guitars sounding chaotic, as if a noise gate is randomly cutting off notes. Nonetheless, I appreciate the concept of creating space, and if executed correctly, it could greatly enhance the song. If we were to re-record this track, I would definitely incorporate your idea and revise that section. So, kudos to you for making a creative decision that has the potential to improve the song. It's rare to see such choices being made on this forum, let alone choices that genuinely enhance the overall composition.
Regarding the mix itself, I perceive a slight harshness in the sound. It could be attributed to my headphones, but the upper mids and highs come across as piercing and unpleasant, especially when it comes to the vocals. However, everything else, including the balance, seems to be fine.
Regarding the mix itself, I perceive a slight harshness in the sound. It could be attributed to my headphones, but the upper mids and highs come across as piercing and unpleasant, especially when it comes to the vocals. However, everything else, including the balance, seems to be fine.