Kick needs more volume. But I like it
Snare sounds killer. Doesn't sound like you replaced the snare. Ill add a bit of top end literally 2.5db on 7.5 to 9k range
First backup vocal to the left sounds weird with too much reverb. Ill suggest set it to the middle and add a mild stereo chorus to make it a little wider.
On the 2nd verse. This is a personal preference. But I muted some of the strings. It ends up sounding less cluttered.
You can add a bit of plate reverb to the verse shaker.(optional)
I hear you added some distortion to the bridge guitars. Ill suggest, remove it and just raise the volume on them with automation. You can also automate stereo panning guitars as much as the song requires.
Dude I like your toms. They need more stereo emphasis, but that's just my taste. I still like them.
The main issue is the kick. Raise the volume of the in/out kick tracks simultaneously. Don't match the faders, just raise their volume. Trust me. You're there my friend.
Before you adjust the kick. Listen to songs similar to this one. I personally listened to Juanes - Es Por Ti. To more or less match the vibe
BTW this comment is in relation to your first track. The first post
Snare sounds killer. Doesn't sound like you replaced the snare. Ill add a bit of top end literally 2.5db on 7.5 to 9k range
First backup vocal to the left sounds weird with too much reverb. Ill suggest set it to the middle and add a mild stereo chorus to make it a little wider.
On the 2nd verse. This is a personal preference. But I muted some of the strings. It ends up sounding less cluttered.
You can add a bit of plate reverb to the verse shaker.(optional)
I hear you added some distortion to the bridge guitars. Ill suggest, remove it and just raise the volume on them with automation. You can also automate stereo panning guitars as much as the song requires.
Dude I like your toms. They need more stereo emphasis, but that's just my taste. I still like them.
The main issue is the kick. Raise the volume of the in/out kick tracks simultaneously. Don't match the faders, just raise their volume. Trust me. You're there my friend.
Before you adjust the kick. Listen to songs similar to this one. I personally listened to Juanes - Es Por Ti. To more or less match the vibe
BTW this comment is in relation to your first track. The first post