The drums sound quite "small" which isn't the type of sound I would go for in this song, but this isn't wrong, it's just a matter of taste. I think maybe you tried to make up for this by making them louder, because they are quite loud with snare being the main focus in the mix. Which is probably what makes the vocals sound pushed back in the mix too much. Certain kick hits push your master compressor too hard or something, because there's a significant drop in volume ie. 1:36 at "he looked" 2:15 at kick+crash hit
But everything's audible which means it's balanced and the tone is good and that's what matters the most.
Overall I think it's an OK mix which needs some more polishing
But everything's audible which means it's balanced and the tone is good and that's what matters the most.
Overall I think it's an OK mix which needs some more polishing