29-04-2023, 10:02 PM
I'll agree that the intro guitar could be centered. It could also use...something. The part is fairly simple and risks being mundane. It doesn't need a huge obvious effect but maybe some subtle and subliminal delay to add to the rhythm of the part would help it move along. Also, the notes die a bit too quickly.
The rhythm guitar doesn't really bother me as much as it does Mike. Though I think it could be automated back during the vocals. At least in the verse. Panning is an option but it may still call attention to itself peripherally.
I'd say the vocal feels a bit 'nasal'. It's not the mix, it's just how his voice is. I think that could be tamed a little in the 1.5khz area. + or - whatever sounds good. It's kind of where that staccato guitar is too.
I don't hate the low end but if'n I need to nit pick I could use more separation between the kick and bass. They work well together but I wish the individual parts were a little more distinct.
The rhythm guitar doesn't really bother me as much as it does Mike. Though I think it could be automated back during the vocals. At least in the verse. Panning is an option but it may still call attention to itself peripherally.
I'd say the vocal feels a bit 'nasal'. It's not the mix, it's just how his voice is. I think that could be tamed a little in the 1.5khz area. + or - whatever sounds good. It's kind of where that staccato guitar is too.
I don't hate the low end but if'n I need to nit pick I could use more separation between the kick and bass. They work well together but I wish the individual parts were a little more distinct.