Hi there! The main thing that i find that you need to work more is on the drums. Overall it sounds too soft and weak, snare needs to be tighter and more snappy as well as kick needs to be punchier, you are probably using too much the room track, wich for me just seemed to weaken it all. Your guitars sounds fine and the overall tonal balance of the track is good. I find the vocals too loud and dry for my taste...and because of that the the levels of the different tracks are a bit wrong being the vocals on too much on top of everything. Would be nice is u cleaned a bit the mid lows and thighten up the lows, as it's a bit too muddy.
Apart from that u mastered ur track too hot, just looking at it's wave file it's completly limited and lacks all dinamics, probably that comes from the mix too but that's one of the reasons why ur mix lacks punch and strenght...Mastering that loud will just squash and choke your mix, plus any streaming service would turn it's gain down by at least 7dB...Louder is not better and in this case is not doing good to your mix.
Not a bad mix overall but still need a bit of work. Keep up the good work
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Apart from that u mastered ur track too hot, just looking at it's wave file it's completly limited and lacks all dinamics, probably that comes from the mix too but that's one of the reasons why ur mix lacks punch and strenght...Mastering that loud will just squash and choke your mix, plus any streaming service would turn it's gain down by at least 7dB...Louder is not better and in this case is not doing good to your mix.
Not a bad mix overall but still need a bit of work. Keep up the good work
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