Hi!
Listening to v2...
My thoughts:
The main thing for me is that I think the kick and snare are a bit heavy for my taste. I think if you could have them a bit lower in the mix this would have the effect of brightening up the mix and would enable the synths and guitar parts to shine through a bit better.
Not sure if the drums are also a bit too compressed overall? For tracks like this I feel you can leave the drums feeling more electronic if that makes sense? In general the volume of electronic instruments is quite stable in the mix, so I find you can get away with lighter touch from compression - just use enough to sit them in the mix. I don’t feel you have to fight them as much to get them to punch through, as you would with real drums.
I feel the rest of the mix, the balances, etc is pretty good and on point, but things are perhaps just being overshadowed by the drums a touch too much for me.
Anyway, hope that helps? Keep it up!
Cheers!
Listening to v2...
My thoughts:
The main thing for me is that I think the kick and snare are a bit heavy for my taste. I think if you could have them a bit lower in the mix this would have the effect of brightening up the mix and would enable the synths and guitar parts to shine through a bit better.
Not sure if the drums are also a bit too compressed overall? For tracks like this I feel you can leave the drums feeling more electronic if that makes sense? In general the volume of electronic instruments is quite stable in the mix, so I find you can get away with lighter touch from compression - just use enough to sit them in the mix. I don’t feel you have to fight them as much to get them to punch through, as you would with real drums.
I feel the rest of the mix, the balances, etc is pretty good and on point, but things are perhaps just being overshadowed by the drums a touch too much for me.
Anyway, hope that helps? Keep it up!
Cheers!
Just uploaded a mix/master? Waiting for comments? Why not give back and critique a mix/master, or two!