17-08-2022, 06:01 AM
Hi Brady,
the vocal could do with being a little brighter for me to open it up, some nice ideas but the claps sound too clean compared to the rest, you have a pretty good balance with the instruments but some stuff like the guitars get lost in parts. I think the main synth could come down a bit and some depth added to it. The low end sounds a little muddy, really like the idea of all the big verb on the last synth break, the background vocals also could do with coming down but that might just be preference as i wasnt really feeling them being very audible at all. Its good overall just maybe a little dry and dark.
the vocal could do with being a little brighter for me to open it up, some nice ideas but the claps sound too clean compared to the rest, you have a pretty good balance with the instruments but some stuff like the guitars get lost in parts. I think the main synth could come down a bit and some depth added to it. The low end sounds a little muddy, really like the idea of all the big verb on the last synth break, the background vocals also could do with coming down but that might just be preference as i wasnt really feeling them being very audible at all. Its good overall just maybe a little dry and dark.