Yeah I got it, I just realised I forgot to apologise in my earlier post 
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Anyway, (and more importantly), lets get back to the mix!
If you check out the library version, for me it's the drums and vocal that are quite prominent, with the rest of the instruments kind of filling in the space between. Particularly listen out to the kick and the snare and notice how clearly you can hear them, and also how much space they are taking up.
With your mix you kind of have the instuments and vocals up front with the drums more towards the background. Might be worth trying just playing the drums and vocal and getting them where you want them, then sneak in the instruments around them, which might just change the feel in the right direction I think. Also pay attention to the transitions in the track and use automation, etc to ensure a smooth flow between sections.
Cheers!
. Anyway, (and more importantly), lets get back to the mix!
If you check out the library version, for me it's the drums and vocal that are quite prominent, with the rest of the instruments kind of filling in the space between. Particularly listen out to the kick and the snare and notice how clearly you can hear them, and also how much space they are taking up.
With your mix you kind of have the instuments and vocals up front with the drums more towards the background. Might be worth trying just playing the drums and vocal and getting them where you want them, then sneak in the instruments around them, which might just change the feel in the right direction I think. Also pay attention to the transitions in the track and use automation, etc to ensure a smooth flow between sections.
Cheers!
Just uploaded a mix/master? Waiting for comments? Why not give back and critique a mix/master, or two!