10-08-2022, 06:17 AM
Thanx george edwards for your feedback in my posrt, so here is my feedback in your post.
The goods:
-Balance between the track and vocals is quite good.
-Tonal balance of the vocals are pretty good I like it, they are not harsh and you can understand every word.
-The FX on the second vocals are good, to my taste are a little bit loud.
The bads:
-The low end I think is missing, you can push more low end in this track, you can do any parallel process like compression or saturation and add it underneath, be careful with the phase issues.
-The first vocal is too dry compare to the second vocal, the second vocal has very intersting FX and the first one doesnt, That's unfavorable for the cohesion of the track.
That's my opinion. Please don't get offended this is an honest opinion and I'm trying to be constructive. overall good work mate, keep it up!!!
Cheers!!
The goods:
-Balance between the track and vocals is quite good.
-Tonal balance of the vocals are pretty good I like it, they are not harsh and you can understand every word.
-The FX on the second vocals are good, to my taste are a little bit loud.
The bads:
-The low end I think is missing, you can push more low end in this track, you can do any parallel process like compression or saturation and add it underneath, be careful with the phase issues.
-The first vocal is too dry compare to the second vocal, the second vocal has very intersting FX and the first one doesnt, That's unfavorable for the cohesion of the track.
That's my opinion. Please don't get offended this is an honest opinion and I'm trying to be constructive. overall good work mate, keep it up!!!
Cheers!!