14-11-2012, 09:30 PM
There's a lot of nice stuff in here, and overall a nice sense of expansiveness that implies to me that you've got head screwed on pretty well as regards sends effects in particular.
Your male lead vocal is so heavily widened that I think you're running into mono-compatibility difficulties. It's also a bit unusual for Bollywood tracks to have such heavily effected lead vocals -- and in this case it's a bit incongruous given the naturalistic sound you've gone for with the female sound. There's also a big mismatch between the relative levels of those two lead vocals relative to the backing.
The bass feels like it doesn't support the low end quite enough overall, which means that the mix as a whole just feels like it's lacking warmth. The thin-sounding guitar and piano timbres doesn't help in that respect either.
The solo guitar feels rather too dry to me, as if it's not really stuck onto the backing properly.
Your male lead vocal is so heavily widened that I think you're running into mono-compatibility difficulties. It's also a bit unusual for Bollywood tracks to have such heavily effected lead vocals -- and in this case it's a bit incongruous given the naturalistic sound you've gone for with the female sound. There's also a big mismatch between the relative levels of those two lead vocals relative to the backing.
The bass feels like it doesn't support the low end quite enough overall, which means that the mix as a whole just feels like it's lacking warmth. The thin-sounding guitar and piano timbres doesn't help in that respect either.
The solo guitar feels rather too dry to me, as if it's not really stuck onto the backing properly.