29-09-2021, 08:45 AM
Some immediate thoughts:
1. The synth at the beginning is a bit loud, pulls the balance a lot to the left at its first hit
2. The delay on the vocal makes it feel like it was recorded in a bathroom
3. The instruments feel very spacious, the vocal dry in comparison
4. The hats stand out a lot
5. The vocal has some harsh frequencies in the buildup
6. The chorus drops in energy compared to the buildup. I observed that in a lot of mixes, is that on purpose? In my version, I tried to make the choruses hit as hard as possible.
7. There is some white noise right when the song starts
8. I like that you turned down the acoustic guitar
General balance feels about right (maybe a bit harsh?).
I would especially concentrate on points 2. and 6.
1. The synth at the beginning is a bit loud, pulls the balance a lot to the left at its first hit
2. The delay on the vocal makes it feel like it was recorded in a bathroom
3. The instruments feel very spacious, the vocal dry in comparison
4. The hats stand out a lot
5. The vocal has some harsh frequencies in the buildup
6. The chorus drops in energy compared to the buildup. I observed that in a lot of mixes, is that on purpose? In my version, I tried to make the choruses hit as hard as possible.
7. There is some white noise right when the song starts
8. I like that you turned down the acoustic guitar
General balance feels about right (maybe a bit harsh?).
I would especially concentrate on points 2. and 6.