Hi,
This is shaping up quite well. Personally I feel this is generally the right approach for this track. Vocals do need a touch of de-essing though I think. It's not sounding too bad on headphones but the esses were just a touch too much for me on the speakers when I checked this out earlier. For me the vocals do need to retain the 'essy' character, but they just need to be controlled a bit more.
Perhaps could do with just a bit more reverb overall for me, to add a little bit more atmosphere and maybe push that synth back a bit. I realise I'm too used to my mix by now - I do feel a delay, reverb or something needs to hang over a bit more at the 40s mark.
Pretty good for 40 minutes work though - just needs a bit of polish. I wouldn't have even finished sorting through the tracks in that time!
Cheers!
This is shaping up quite well. Personally I feel this is generally the right approach for this track. Vocals do need a touch of de-essing though I think. It's not sounding too bad on headphones but the esses were just a touch too much for me on the speakers when I checked this out earlier. For me the vocals do need to retain the 'essy' character, but they just need to be controlled a bit more.
Perhaps could do with just a bit more reverb overall for me, to add a little bit more atmosphere and maybe push that synth back a bit. I realise I'm too used to my mix by now - I do feel a delay, reverb or something needs to hang over a bit more at the 40s mark.
Pretty good for 40 minutes work though - just needs a bit of polish. I wouldn't have even finished sorting through the tracks in that time!
Cheers!
Just uploaded a mix/master? Waiting for comments? Why not give back and critique a mix/master, or two!