18-03-2021, 05:15 PM
I'm losing the bass. I hear it. It pokes through but it doesn't seem to do the role of anchoring the lows of the song. The chorus gets pretty washed out. It feels like a compression thing or maybe just loud guitars. I like the extra spark of energy but I think the vocal suffers. I like the bridge flange but it's loud and the vocal gets lost. I general the vocal feels like an afterthought.
On second listen maybe the guitars could feel a little less 'excited'. They use up a lot of the overall energy. This song really straddles the line between pop and rock and I feel like it should be more pop.
Aslo, I have a hangnail that is annoying me and making me ornery. Apropos of nothing but certain environmental factors can have an impact on how I'm perceiving things. There's also at least one typo, let's see if you can find it!
Does any of this make sense? I'm mostly asking for myself because I'm bad at critiquing.
On second listen maybe the guitars could feel a little less 'excited'. They use up a lot of the overall energy. This song really straddles the line between pop and rock and I feel like it should be more pop.
Aslo, I have a hangnail that is annoying me and making me ornery. Apropos of nothing but certain environmental factors can have an impact on how I'm perceiving things. There's also at least one typo, let's see if you can find it!
Does any of this make sense? I'm mostly asking for myself because I'm bad at critiquing.
It doesn't have to sound good. People just need to think it sounds good.