24-02-2021, 01:20 PM
Feels good for a start. The main thing that jumps out at me are the vocals. They'e a bit in the back behind the guitars and drums. The effects too, might be blurring them. Another thing to keep an eye (ear) on is the snare/guitar sound. The snare tone is blending in with some of the guitars. Maybe less bottom snare mic?
It doesn't have to sound good. People just need to think it sounds good.