your mix sounds good on my monitors - thumbs up! things i didn't like:
- too much delay on the vocals in the chorus
- kick and snare can be a tad louder, toms are fine.
- bring out the small details, e.g. the bass slide before the third chorus. or the short intro riff before the second chorus (a little flangeresque sweep can do wonders)
- is it just me or is the bass too low?
things i like:
- radio voice effect in the bridge
- love the solos