Hi there, I like your mix!
Two things that personally did not like much are distorted el guitar and sfx (3&4), I mean they're cool but in context are moving away my attention from the song and its main elements. But that's just a personal opinion, someone else could find those as strenght points.
I would like to know your opinion about my mix too, I don't like much the result and maybe you can help me to improve it!
sounds great!!, less is more with the cool sounding guitar fx's i think in my opinion, they sound great bringing sections in and out. nice use of chorus on the vocals too !