Hello Txory! I'm not an expert mixing, but I enjoyed a lot your mix!
I want to tell you that there is a special effect (I think that is maybe in the mastering time) that is making to shake my head with this Drums+Guitar panning rhythm (in a Good way).
This effect is also making the trumpets to be like in a Tape-Good sound for me.
Super clear voices between all the instruments, everything sounds balanced for me. And cymbals in all the sound scene make it so entertaining.
(Im not the autor and I'm still learning), but I enjoyed it.