21-01-2015, 01:24 AM
yours comments.... thank
patrick talbot mix
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21-01-2015, 03:54 AM
Nice attempt kroyer 33!
I really like the bass in your version, it punches through very nicely (even on small PC speakers). That being said, it's perhaps a bit too loud, at times it seems louder than the lead vocal. A few other things that could be better IMHO... The first guitar solo is too low, it's lower than the rhythm guitar! The lead vocal is a bit muffled, I would try to remove some of the low-mids and add some air to it. The kick has too much beater to it, I would dial this back quite a lot. It's especially weird when it hits hard, for example around 0:51 It sounds almost like a metal kick! The second solo start is missing the double guitar, you might want to push that a bit. The last solo could use a few more DBs as well, the rhythm and extra guitars are louder than that, I would reverse the ration between the extra guitars and the lead. I think you're off to a good start though, keep it up!
"Music, in performance, is a type of sculpture. The air in the performance is sculpted into something." - Frank Zappa
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