Howdy from Austin, Texas

[Marty]

V2

Some things that jumped out at me. The lead vocal line at about 1:49 is a bit out of time. Also the D-essing is pretty heavy handed. The Esses are pretty much gone (mostly but not always) and it makes the vocals feel weird and lisp-y. It's mostly obvious in the choruses.

 I spent more time that I wanted being nit-picky on the fairly harsh (upper midrange) vocals, and I could have spent more, but I chose to just go with it.