Ben Flowers - Retry - my mix

[Fab354]

This is my mix for this song.
I am really looking for any feedback because it's my genere and I need to improve my skills.
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[Y's Man]

Bass sounds good from the start and the pad, the vocals are a bit dry but seem well done for what you had to work with, i dont like the how they changed just before the "drop". When it all kicks in you are losing the power though and it all goes quite thin and the vocal starts to really seperate from the rest. I would say try to not worry about loudness and concentrate on the quality of each sound.