Everything sounds nice and thick to start vocal comes in fine, could maybe focus on the kick a little less it seems a bit overpowering, bringing it down might clear up the toms a bit, theres also some pick noise around 3.30 coming through which isnt pleasant. from the bass i think maybe check the eq on that.
Hello how are you, if indeed what you say about the kick and the toms is true and it is because at that time I did not have my monitors regulated, nor my control room, then I gave a lot to the records, now this does not happen to me so much everything more controlled.
As for the bass close to 3.30, I left it like that because I notice that it gives a very aggressive touch to that part.
Now I listen to your mix and I will give you my opinion, thank you
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