Well, since you have mentioned about your mixing setup, which is very nice, it's also worth saying that any gear and plugins won't make your mix sound good if you don't know what to listen for. Your mix is squoshed and harsh, really hard to listen to, especially the overheads.
There you go. Second version is like night and day. For the better. Although vocals are too prominent and also way to much dessed, which is kind of funny, sounds like you would knocked singer's teeth out. Kick, snare and bass are in very nice proportion and blend, definetly the strongest part of this mix.
Yea i agree with Grzesiek it is better for sure. Hahaha that comment on "knocked the singers teeth out" was so funny, best joke this year so far! Had me laughing loud it really sounds that way lol but no offense to andrear the mix is better for sure.