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Simplemachine_Ingloria_Full - rvox - 13-04-2023
Hello, I liked the music and the mix, I hope you like it
RE: Simplemachine_Ingloria_Full - Shenwoody - 15-05-2023
Hello,
I'm a beginner, so my remarks may not be accurate.
Here's what I hear :
It's pumping / on the piano.
The voice needs to be cleaned (it's messy). (eq, breath, deesser)
In the beginning, the bass is drowned (why so low?), covered by the voice.
I can't clearly hear the cello on the choruses (only the violin)
On the choruses, there's too much energy on the high frequencies (it's aggressive).
RE: Simplemachine_Ingloria_Full - rvox - 16-05-2023
(15-05-2023, 07:57 PM)hello thanks for your comment, you are right, my equipment is precarious but with the headphones I discovered my problems in this mix, the first version does not have much compression which justifies this pumping and in the second version I used plugins more focused on analogues which it made it more dirty and tangled, but I confess that Ill try to improve it with another songShenwoody Wrote: Hello,
I'm a beginner, so my remarks may not be accurate.
Here's what I hear :
It's pumping / on the piano.
The voice needs to be cleaned (it's messy). (eq, breath, deesser)
In the beginning, the bass is drowned (why so low?), covered by the voice.
I can't clearly hear the cello on the choruses (only the violin)
On the choruses, there's too much energy on the high frequencies (it's aggressive).