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MotorTapes - Shore [Masterd By EleKtroFR] - EleKtroFR - 17-11-2013 Hi Guys, i'm new to this forum, and i love i can practice with other people, it's so motivating! I've been producing for 2 years different kinds of music and my dream is to become a Mastering/Mixing engeneer... I'm 20 years old. So, without wasting precious time i would like to share my mix with you. EVERY CRITIC IS WELL ACCEPPTED, Feel free to say "Go Back Home" or something like that, i want to practice . Thanks in advance!! P.S= Sorry for my bad english, i'm italian . RE: MotorTapes - Shore [Masterd By EleKtroFR] - EleKtroFR - 22-11-2013 Here is my final mix of this wonderful track! Hope you like it Critics are well accepted . RE: MotorTapes - Shore [Masterd By EleKtroFR] - Moonwrist - 20-12-2013 Hello. To me it sound like you have mix together except the guitars. Drums and bass mix sounds good but where is the guitar? Same thing in chorus. And well maybe kick could be a bit louder. Or just the hit/slap. But in chorus I think that the lead voc + bvox are too loud. I like the big sound of bvox but the balance is a little out of hand. And I'm not sure if you have your reverbs sort out. Keys, guitars and bvox doesn't really sound like they are in the same space or time(in decades). This is just guessing but do you have some sort of multiband comp in master that sucks out the deep low end? PS: Sorry my bad listening. I'm ***that is classified information*** RE: MotorTapes - Shore [Masterd By EleKtroFR] - EleKtroFR - 21-12-2013 Thank you for your answer Moonwrist! I think i will take a look at my mix following your advice. So you think guitars could be louder and drum track could be more powerful, right? What do you mean with "balance is out of hand"? still Thanks for your answers i need them RE: MotorTapes - Shore [Masterd By EleKtroFR] - Moonwrist - 21-12-2013 I think that guitars could be louder or more up front in your mix. The guitar solo part is ok but in chorus I think that I hear clearly only the first guitar track (21) For drums I miss more attack/click/slap to kick drum. The snare sound is good and solid from start to finish but that really come in front of the guitar after the intro. Don't change the the snare but boost guitars a bit. I don't want to sound like an asshole and boost my own ego but listen the intro of my mix and compare it to intro of your mix. Maybe that will tell more clearly what I try to say with my bad english. "Balance out of hand". To me vox are too loud in chorus and bvox somehow are more clearer and louder than the lead voc. That can also be the sound. Maybe there is more presence boost in bvoc compared to lead voc. In any case I think that the lead voc should be in that number one spot and that's why I write out of balance. RE: MotorTapes - Shore [Masterd By EleKtroFR] - EleKtroFR - 22-12-2013 Hello, here is my new mix of this track ... It has been remixed and remastered. I love the way it sounds now, it's so much better! PLEASE TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK MOONWRIST If you wouldn't have answered my post i wouldn't have done these fixes, thanks....! RE: MotorTapes - Shore [Masterd By EleKtroFR] - EleKtroFR - 23-12-2013 Here it is! I think this could be my final mix! Hope you like it! So much better now , thanks for your critics! RE: MotorTapes - Shore [Masterd By EleKtroFR] - Moonwrist - 30-12-2013 Someone here has a signature saying something like "Mix isn't ready ever. It is just abandoned." I say one thing of your "final" mix and next one says something different I like very much how your mix has evolved. Not sure if everyone else share my opinion. One thing that I noticed from this post 7 mix. The guitar versus lead voc. The transient, the hit of guitar can come up front of the lead voc but that sustain should fall behind of the lead voc. Either presence EQ, level adjustment, wave shaping or sidechain comp/gate could fix this. Or all of those listed used to balance those tracks. RE: MotorTapes - Shore [Masterd By EleKtroFR] - EleKtroFR - 01-01-2014 Hi Moonwrist, thanks for your reply! What would you try to enhance in this mix? Should i give more power to vocals? Do you like how the guitars sound? still thanks RE: MotorTapes - Shore [Masterd By EleKtroFR] - bmullen - 01-01-2014 Your balance is getting a lot better. There seems to be too much build up in the lower upper mid range in the guitars especially. Try toning them down around the 2-3K area and see if that helps and perhaps tame their transients with a bit more compression threshold. |