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Speak Softly: 'Broken Man' mix and master - behnam200 - 16-04-2018
HI.
please share your opinion with me.
RE: Speak Softly: 'Broken Man' mix and master - Bombe - 23-09-2018
Hi there.
I have some comments, if I may.
- In the first verse the voice is too loud which makes it seem like it doesn’t belong.
- In the chorus and the following verses it is not loud enough and is easily overshadowed by the percussion.
- The delays on the lead vox seem pretty chaotic. A bit more order (and maybe fewer taps) could work better here.
- The bass will not be audible on devices without a low end.