24-06-2020, 03:49 PM
27-06-2020, 06:39 PM
Hi Silona,
A very nice use of the arrangement, great presentation of the elements and well fitted to the genre. The percussion sounds punchy and super clean, and the synths work very well. I miss a liitle brightness on the guitars (the ones that come up from time to time, not the rhythm one) and the voice sounds a little too breathy and airy for me. Sometimes a little bit nasal but his voice tone is quite like that and doesn't stand out as bad, just a little too noticeable. You could also dirty up the voice a little bit, and maybe experiment with echoes and a little reverb, since this arrangement is very spacious, and the tone of the lyrics is pretty cheeky
A very nice use of the arrangement, great presentation of the elements and well fitted to the genre. The percussion sounds punchy and super clean, and the synths work very well. I miss a liitle brightness on the guitars (the ones that come up from time to time, not the rhythm one) and the voice sounds a little too breathy and airy for me. Sometimes a little bit nasal but his voice tone is quite like that and doesn't stand out as bad, just a little too noticeable. You could also dirty up the voice a little bit, and maybe experiment with echoes and a little reverb, since this arrangement is very spacious, and the tone of the lyrics is pretty cheeky