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I recently mixed this song
This is my version of the mix 
Please help me improve my mix

Good day, Keyur! Sounds interesting and an emphasis on percussion elements can also be useful but it seems to me that the whole mix has lost it s body in terms of spectral balance, maybe you should try to use some reference tracks. I used this - Pat Metheny Group - To the End of the World. But in fact it is my personal opinion, hope that helps. BTW now I m going to post my version of the mix for your judgement -)

Thank you max, I did listen to your mix and the reffrence "To the to the end of the word"
I understand what you said and agree to it, i will improve this mix