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Mixed this in UA's new daw LUNA.
(on headphones)
Hi pmilani!
I like your mix. I feel that the cymbals are too harsh, especially in the chorus. For the verse sections, I think that there's too much reverb on vocals. The explosive effect before the chorus doesn't sound as if it's part of the song. Maybe because it's too loud in the mix, or for some other reason. Of course that's just my opinion Smile
Cheers!
Hi Daniel, thanks for commenting.
(08-06-2020, 04:23 PM)Daniel Lemes Wrote: [ -> ]I feel that the cymbals are too harsh, especially in the chorus.
in the chorus cymbals were played to create a continuous wash, maybe they need to be a bit more behind ? i don't know what exactly you are hearing as harsh, what's your listening env?

Quote:For the verse sections, I think that there's too much reverb on vocals. The explosive effect before the chorus doesn't sound as if it's part of the song. Maybe because it's too loud in the mix, or for some other reason
On vocals, did you mean too much delay maybe? it's pretty obvious yeah, I was looking for a way to spice up the vocal and fill some space
The explosive effect, I cannot say I liked it much, but it's in the multitracks: keeping it low equates to making it useless, so I made it obvious -- whether it works is a thing that should rather be discussed with the producers/artist.

Thanks for your feedback!