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Feedback wanted!

Thanks!
Fixed that weird vocal distortion(turns out my tape emulation plugin's distortion setting was too high, doh!) and aligned tempo of the delay applied to the backing vocals near the end of the song.
Hey jorhaowei,

Taking a listen, I like the overall balance. In terms of the instruments, I would probably pull the bottom snare mic back a bit in the mix, I feel that it's taking away from the overall punch of the snare. I would also address the midrange in the bass, I feel that's it's getting swallowed up by the synth patches. The balance of the vocals between the the verse and the chorus seem to be a little off as well, as in the chorus vocals come in quieter. When the electric lead comes in at the 2nd chorus, to me it feels a little upfront. Overall, I like what you've done with effects, I don't feel that anything sounds too washed, and that the character of each instrument is able to shit because of that.

Overall, I think a few tweaks and you've got a really solid mix! Thanks for taking the time with it Smile.
- Robert
(10-02-2020, 02:34 AM)RPHammon Wrote: [ -> ]Hey jorhaowei,

Taking a listen, I like the overall balance. In terms of the instruments, I would probably pull the bottom snare mic back a bit in the mix, I feel that it's taking away from the overall punch of the snare. I would also address the midrange in the bass, I feel that's it's getting swallowed up by the synth patches. The balance of the vocals between the the verse and the chorus seem to be a little off as well, as in the chorus vocals come in quieter. When the electric lead comes in at the 2nd chorus, to me it feels a little upfront. Overall, I like what you've done with effects, I don't feel that anything sounds too washed, and that the character of each instrument is able to shit because of that.

Overall, I think a few tweaks and you've got a really solid mix! Thanks for taking the time with it Smile.
- Robert

Hi Robert! Thanks for the feedback Smile Cool track btw,kinda reminds me of Three Days Grace.

I followed your advice and lowered the snare bottom mic,focused the midrange in the bass,adjusted the volume of the vocals in the chorus and also brought the electric lead further back in the 2nd chorus.

Let me know what you think!
I listened to ‘V2’.

- Kick is pumping the mix
- Snare is too dry
- Verse vocals are a tad too loud and harsh
- Bass is a tad loud in the verse
- Get of breaths in verse vocal
- Bring down chorus vocals a tad

Good luck!