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Hi,

My try at this track.

Thanks!

Very good, Mike. The first verse vocal could be better expressed. Everything else is on point.

Hi,

Many thanks for listening, appreciate the comments.

I *think* I am happy with the first verse vocal. It did take me quite some time to settle on a level though, due to the vocal tone and delivery style. There might be some mileage in rethinking the vocal tone with eq moves though perhaps?

Cheers!