01-04-2019, 07:39 PM
25-05-2019, 09:16 AM
I'm not a pro, so take this with a pinch of salt, but here are a few comments:
- hum before the song is annoying,
- pitch-shifting the whole song makes for really interesting vocal timbre :-)
- lots of recording artifacts/problems audible,
- the lows and low-mid balance seems uneven before 1:13,
- in the chorus at 1:35, with all the instruments playing at the same time, the vocal seem to lack space around it to breathe (sounds a bit claustrophobic),
- at around 1:55 some low vocal phrases clash with the lower guitar and don't sound clear,
- bass fill at 2:06 is buried (could be a bit more prominent).