22-09-2018, 12:33 PM
23-09-2018, 09:46 AM
Nice work captnjonesy. I think you can work on the tonally and arrangement with the guitars a little more though. They are coming across a little harsh and seem to be competing for the same space at times. Perhaps the main rhythm guitar could be pushed back a little. The 2nd lead guitar that comes in at 0.55 mark is almost lost to the mix. This is a lovely part that I feel you need to give more consideration to. It's timely entry really helps with the built of the intro. I hope this helps.
Dave
Dave
29-09-2018, 01:18 PM
Thank you Dangerous Dave for your critique of my mix. I totally agree with your comments and have spent a little more time on the guitars which seems to be the main focus of this song. My new version is posted and I think it sounds better.