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Greetings everyone! I just found this forum and I'm finding really nice to hear other people mixes and being able to try myself.

Here is my first try on this song. Feel free to comment and show problems or whatever.

(sorry for the bad English, not my language).

It sounds really good. There's nothing to complain about. I have two thoughts.
-It's kind of a long song where not much happens. Consider some effects or automation to make something stand out occasionally to keep the listener's attention and catch the ear.
-The later part of the song could be a little bigger. It feels like it wants to explode a bit more and is held back. I like the vocal effects there.

Overall, everything works. It just could use that little bit extra to get it to great.
Good job
(sorry for my bad English, I'm an American.