This is my mix. I haven't used samples for kick and snare. Comment please.....
Your mix is really dry and focused regarding the drums, try to keep an eye on bass dynamics of the kick. It sounds a bit undefined to me.. and you could try to build a better sound stage with the guitars. Bass is fine! The vocals stick out a bit too much and aren't really integrated in the mix, but all in all a solid mix. Keep it up!
Thank you wurstdrummer.
Here is my new version... Comment please.....