I'm alright - 1st pass

[Jmaltby]

Hey everyone.

I'm a little new to all of this and i'm really trying to learn.
Here is my first pass of "I'm alright"
I'd love any thoughts or feedback.

thanks!

[NeonBlack828]

all matters on taste of course,

Try automating the chorus up about 2 db each time, add some dynamic, or rather lowering the rest of the track instead.
Look into the solo parts, add a tiny bit of volume to make them highlight.

For me the last chorus, has a build into where the percussion solos more and everything else kinda drops down a bit. Also has a few bass fills. once more emphasize those.

I guess use some volume automation to emphasize dynamics.

Overall: Sounds great, managed to create a tight rhythm section and present bass drum. while making the remaining instruments clean and audible... well except for that damned piano that I can never find a place for

[Jmaltby]

Those are great notes.
Thanks so much for taking the time and for your considered response.
I really appreciate the feedback!

I'll give it a shot.

Best,
J

...and yea that piano... ugh