Hey, liked a lot of what you did here. Nice compression on the bass and drums, and balance of the instrumentation seems fine.
Think the vocals could be brighter/punchier and sit on top of the mix more. Maybe the low end could be a little clearer - sounds like the compression is making it a bit muddy. Panning on the drum sounds could be a spread a bit wider too.
- That's my input!
Would love to hear your thoughts on my mix...just posted it.