patrick talbot mix

[kroyer 33]

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[ptalbot]

Nice attempt kroyer 33!
I really like the bass in your version, it punches through very nicely (even on small PC speakers). That being said, it's perhaps a bit too loud, at times it seems louder than the lead vocal.
A few other things that could be better IMHO...
The first guitar solo is too low, it's lower than the rhythm guitar!
The lead vocal is a bit muffled, I would try to remove some of the low-mids and add some air to it.
The kick has too much beater to it, I would dial this back quite a lot. It's especially weird when it hits hard, for example around 0:51 It sounds almost like a metal kick!
The second solo start is missing the double guitar, you might want to push that a bit.
The last solo could use a few more DBs as well, the rhythm and extra guitars are louder than that, I would reverse the ration between the extra guitars and the lead.
I think you're off to a good start though, keep it up!