The mix overall sounds very boxy, especially the vocals. Not a lot of clarity, and no nice low end from the bass. The level balance is okay though.
I see you actually worked really hard on this mix, and let me tell you something: focus on levels/panning first, then dynamics processing, then EQ.
Then your mix should already sound pretty damn good. If you rush one of these things and go to effects straightaway, you'll never get a properly balanced mix, and I got the feeling that's what happened here.
Don't over-EQ (or overcompress) either. The vocals sounded pretty good without any processing.
I see you actually worked really hard on this mix, and let me tell you something: focus on levels/panning first, then dynamics processing, then EQ.
Then your mix should already sound pretty damn good. If you rush one of these things and go to effects straightaway, you'll never get a properly balanced mix, and I got the feeling that's what happened here.
Don't over-EQ (or overcompress) either. The vocals sounded pretty good without any processing.