University Project, Phre the Eon - "everybody is falling apart", Mixing

[nathanielevanswork]

Hi There,

I'm new to this... but i'm doing a final year project for university and it involves improving my mixing techniques. The track I have chosen to do is Phre the Eon - "everybody is falling apart". Can you take a listen to the mix I have done and compare it to the commercial mix in terms of quality please. The two tracks have to be uploaded to my soundcloud at https://soundcloud.com/nathanielevansuni.

If you wish to see the blog that is being with the project here it is also:
http://nathanielevansuni.blogspot.co.uk/

Thanks for your time
Naith