Semantics attempt

[vinnyweight]

Hi, I'm kinda new to all this and this is my first attempt at doing a mix using the limited knowledge i have of doing demo's for my band. To me it all sounds a bit crowded and messy but I'm not really sure how to tidy it up and make it sound like a nice, crisp even mix. Constructive criticism is most welcome; I'm here to learn.
Thanks a lot.

[wurstdrummer]

Hi!
Good mix, but I would cut out the delay. It's messing with the song's drive a bit