Banned from the Zoo - Turn on me

[Vosk0z]

Hey!

So i took my chance with this beautiful song. I tried to make it sound like it was from a live tv show..-ish.. or a small pub.. or whatever..

Tell me what you think, please!

[Jayceleb]

Hey!

So i took my chance with this beautiful song. I tried to make it sound like it was from a live tv show..-ish.. or a small pub.. or whatever..

Tell me what you think, please!

Hi,
-I like the idea u are trying to implement with the delay on the guitar.
-The vaocal sounds a little more like it's in the pub to me, but then u need to turn down the reverb and the delay a little more.
-The delay and reverb on the ukelele it's a little too much to handle, it brings out some annoying tonnel sound which wouldn't stop ringing in the eardrum.
-The flute out of sync with the rest of the music, U should listen back to it.
-A little more boost on the kick and snare i think will be good

-Overall i like the idea and the bass guitar.
-Im not a pro yet. this is just my opinion, i hope it makes sense.Cheers

[Vosk0z]

Hey there!
Thanks for the feedback,really appreciate it!

There are a couple of things you said i dont really get.

I've listened this track and almost every track im trying to mix on several setups in different situations,car,hi fi systems,2.1 setups,fail 2.0 speakers and so on,just to get a general "balanced" (?) idea of what I've done so far.
That said,i cant hear this annoying sound the ukalele does and irritates your eardrum. Sorry,really cant hear it.
I get the delay/verb on the vocals,im gonna check it out again.
As far as the flute goes,in what way is that ouf sync?
Off tune? Off time-wise (bit early/late compared to the rest of the song)?
Im listening to it right now and i think you may have misjudged it a bit :p
That bass guitar had me worried a bit as those notes were a bit harsh on my sub and i was wondering how they would sound.
Im gonna check the kick-snare drum again

Really thanks a lot for your time and your points.
Cheers!