Hi! Here's my mix from this tune. This was a really weird song, I was struggling a bit to find a good direction with this one. I mangled some of the tracks quite a lot, mostly the bass (envelope filter) and the BVs (leslie cabinet). But the strings and the pianos didn't need almost anything.
I really liked it! I find it interesting how you had a totally different approach to me. Yours gives me a rock impression whereas I after hearing the track thought I should make it as weird and eerie as possible