Maggie May - Please review my Mix!

[Braunfish]

Maggie May - Please review my Mix!
Your review will be very important for me. Thank You!

[heinim]

Maggie May - Please review my Mix!
Your review will be very important for me. Thank You!

Hello Braunfish! I think you have done a good mix here. Good separation and balance. The only small thing for me, the cymbals feel a tiny bit to loud and edgy. Anyway, a good job. Cheers!

[Roy]

Random input after a quick listen. Personally I don't find the cymbals edgy but I suspect it's more that my current listening situation is a bit darker than Heinim's. So give it some consideration.

I don't know the multitracks but I feel like the drums, generally are a bit...unfocused?
Or conversely, everything else might be a bit too bright?

I dunno. The instruments feel very in front and 'insistent' It's not easy to listen to. For me at least. It feels like the individual parts were made to sound good but as a whole they don't all sit right. Does that make sense? I'm not pulled in as a listener. The song doesn't feel like it needs to be aggressive.

There might be too much in the 1-4khz range of the guitars and the vocals.

If this were a meal it has too much sauce and covers up the meat.

[Braunfish]

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